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[i]OK gang, here's my first (and so far, only) sales letter. It is actually a B2B sales letter because it's one business soliciting another business.
This is not the final version. I'll post that next. It was part of a basic sales funnel that I did last summer with help from another copywriter in New Zealand. He wrote about half of the sales letter, so technically, I didn't write the whole thing although he was a silent partner and I was responsible for the whole thing. Essentially, his role was like an outsourced mentor. I paid him 50 percent of the fee for the project, which was $1,375. That's actually pretty low for a sales funnel but then again, it was my first and I considered it more of a learning experience (though I never said that to the client) while doing my best.
I've included real, actual client info here so all I ask is that you respect that and not contact the client or add the info to your mailing list. (As I'm sure you wouldn't)
Oscar's draft sales letter
final version
This is not the final version. I'll post that next. It was part of a basic sales funnel that I did last summer with help from another copywriter in New Zealand. He wrote about half of the sales letter, so technically, I didn't write the whole thing although he was a silent partner and I was responsible for the whole thing. Essentially, his role was like an outsourced mentor. I paid him 50 percent of the fee for the project, which was $1,375. That's actually pretty low for a sales funnel but then again, it was my first and I considered it more of a learning experience (though I never said that to the client) while doing my best.
I've included real, actual client info here so all I ask is that you respect that and not contact the client or add the info to your mailing list. (As I'm sure you wouldn't)
Oscar's draft sales letter
final version
Last edited by Oscar on Thu Jan 07, 2016 10:49 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : updating info)
