Here's the link. See for yourself:
http://awaimember.groupsite.com/discussion/topics/689032/messages?page=1#message-1149374
While I agree with some of the points, and I'm a little confused about the others. Lots to do to make it "fit the formula."
Going to let it sit for tonight. Tomorrow, I'll deal. AWAI has a TACTFUL way of telling you that for the most part, your letter sucks.
I did a lot of research for this letter and worked on the testimonials. No mention of that from the reviewer.
A lot of paragraph juggling going to happen.
Happy New Year, everyone.
Best,
Jill
http://awaimember.groupsite.com/discussion/topics/689032/messages?page=1#message-1149374
While I agree with some of the points, and I'm a little confused about the others. Lots to do to make it "fit the formula."
Going to let it sit for tonight. Tomorrow, I'll deal. AWAI has a TACTFUL way of telling you that for the most part, your letter sucks.
I did a lot of research for this letter and worked on the testimonials. No mention of that from the reviewer.
A lot of paragraph juggling going to happen.
Happy New Year, everyone.
Best,
Jill